Tuesday, 10 March 2015

The sweaty runner

 "  I need a break " she said in her mind she was griping on.The rocky steep hill sweat was.Swelling threw her body.Pain was written all over her face the beaming sun shined all over her .She was losing her energy .I must get to the top .


2 comments:

  1. Great writing Sofina. I look forward to reading more.

    James

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  2. wow sofina great writing i really like that story and i loved reading it i cant do writing that goodmy writing is really messy

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